Monday, May 28, 2007

The Effects of an Invention in Modern Life

Msn messenger is a popular tool of communicate in the world.Almost everyone have their own ID on msn messenger.Msn messenger is very convenient , fast, and the most important thing is that is free.
We can use msn messenger to chat and discuss something or someone on the internet.We offen
input words waht we want to tell to someone and press the key of enter,and the other side will receive your messenger immediately.Msn messenger not only can send word messenger but also can send symbol of brow to increase the dramatization of dialogue.If you buy microphone ,you can talk with someone on the internet.If you buy a video camera , you can let someone see you at once on the internet.
We can use msn messenger to share our music , picture,archive in our computer.Once upon a time, if we wanted to give someone archive,we had to use mail to send to someone.Now,we can use msn messenger to send our archive that is convenient and speedy.
But, msn mesenger always let us waste time unconsciously.If we do not have control ourself,it is easy to waste time because msn messenger is easy let us crazy .

2 comments:

freshJC said...

I think your article have expressed lots of advantages but not seperated the main points of different kinds of reason. I suggest that you can write the reason clearly in the first sentence of each kinds. Moreover, you can make a conclusion in the last paragraph.

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NEPTUNE said...

你提出來的很有創意,很少人會想到,我也同意你的看法。我覺得優點的闡述,可能可以清楚一些,可以在MSN所擁有的特色上再發揮。結論的部分應該是把全文提出來的論點做個總結。很高興看到是個有創意的文章。

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