Monday, April 09, 2007

Why did you choose your major

I think this is a dramatic process.When i was in the third grade of junior high school,I study very hard every day for enter a senior high school .At the time,there have a channel to enter higer shcool that is called apply for admission to a school.This is a way of no test,just choose only one major and chose different industrial high school then in order .I liked to select handbill of architecture and Taichung industrial high school is the best choose of industrial high school and nearby my home,so the architect is my major and Taichung industrial high school is my first order.Then the result is I matriculated the T.I.H.S. I didn't want to enter the school because I want to enter senior high school not industrial high school,so I intened to give up the school.But about in the end of June I was ill badly,then I decided to report to Taichung industrial high school.Then I was mending nicely.I think this is a point of God. After three years,I enter the department of architecture of NTUST.
During six years of learning architecture,I finded a interesting face of architecture.I enjoyed the life of architect,though it was make me lose sleep.

2 comments:

Summer said...

You didn't want to enter the industrial high school, so why did you apply the industrail high school?

I think you can use more clear topic sentence, if I don't know the title, just read the first line, I don't know what is "this" mean.

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Sean said...

You say "in the end of June I was ill badly,then I decided to report to Taichung industrial high school." So what happen to you,sick or sth? At that time you studied hard, then why you choosed the industrail high school? Could you give me more detail about that?

And you should set a topoc sentence to let this chapter clearly.

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